liesbethw

Not a fan of Hall's British accent. It just threw me off because it wasnt consistent or real. I don't really understand why Jenny couldn't tell her dad that she was fine and would come home soon during those first few days. Nor why all the adults were so keen on not telling a dad about seeing his missing daughter recently. I get that it was needed to set a scene (mysterious, every one is hiding something) but still. Also...Tom was just a bull seeing a red flag running around. Everyone was guilty and had something to hide in his eyes, but to physically harras kids... It was a bit much, even when your child is missing.
With a bit more thought (skipping the British accent, better written time-line) it could have been a really well built story. Because there are definitely some twists and turns that are surprising. Definitely has more potential